Where do I start? This story is...stupid,laughably bad,and most of all disappointing in my opinion because...wow,okay so Jane was created through science,I can understand that but...she was made into an unstoppable killer so she can kill Jeff and the people doing this to her are the U.s government,the police,F.B.I,and C.I.A who did this experiment that not only was funded by our government at the cost of 6.9 million dollars(Which lets be honest is stupid because instead of using that money to help people they use it on making the perfect killer)But one that killed many people...so the government has killed people to make this experiment work but now has Jane on the loose(who is now over-powered )so she can kill Jeff...I'd like to remind everyone that Jeff.is.HUMAN! In the story he is human not some super villain who can kill you just by looking at you,he is as human as you and me(Considering the fact that he's still alive from cutting a smile to his mouth and burning his eyelids off and that's just Bullshit writing)And you're telling me that the police and all their men and women on the force couldn't stop this one guy that they need to involve scientist and the government,Jeff is human no what anybody says and he isn't some calculating killer that is five steps ahead of you he is an insane lunatic that gets off from killing,he was burned alive and snapped by killing his entire family because he lost his mind...back to Jane,Jane the killer was introduced to me through the Creepypasta Jeff vs Jane(Which I believe is a good story)And I wanted to know more about her because someone is actually trying to kill Jeff instead of trying to fuck him(Looking at you fan girls)And I liked her character because she was on a mission for revenge to kill the asshole who killed her parents and I love revenge stories and I liked the fact that she wanted Jeff dead by any means necessary and when I heard that she had a kid with Jeff I wanted to know what was going to happen next but sadly I haven't heard anything...then I read the "real"story which was a piece of garbage that almost ruined the character...and that's it I thought that I would hear no more Jane the killer stories...then read this and I Not going to lie I laughed my ass off when I read this and I'm sorry but I couldn't take any of these characters seriously,I mean Jane was given a life,she had a job she had to pay rent which made her feel human and relatable because after her parents were killed she still tried to look after her sister and try to have a normal life,Which by the way thinking about Jane the killer in an IHOP is hilarious but still good because she's supporting herself and her sister through hard times,this is what I want to read about,Jane having a normal life despite everything that's happened and she's not depressed or crying every few seconds she stands on her own two feet and does what she has to do to take care of her only family,that's the story I want to read because that.is.AWESOME! this story had me when I read that and...I wanted to know more...however things start to get stupid...okay so,Jane is forced to go through an experiment that almost killed her which by the way is funded by the government to kill one guy who's insane not Joker insane but IN.SANE,he doesn't plan things he's a killer Thats it and the police couldn't find or arrest him(again he's human,just some guy with a knife against cops with GUNS and they couldn't use THEM!? "Never bring a knife to a gun fight" must mean shit if you're fighting Jeff the killer...and the Government wastes millions to make the perfect killer...and we all know that always works out! Wolverine he...killed all the scientist...which is the same thing Jane did...Huh...well there is captain America who was made to fight hydra with the help of the super solider syrum which made him a super hero and stronger than normal humans and Jane had the liquid hate that...made her stronger than normal humans...Huh...anyway this story made Jane into...a comic book character or anime or any other types of fiction,I will give credit to the "real" story because despite all the mary-sue bullshit she was still human which made her relatable,she wants revenge on Jeff because he killed her family and friends,I'm not saying this always happens I'm saying that we can understand why she's doing what she's doing however this story made Jane WAAAAAAAY too Over powered that if there's a sequel to to this story it will end the second Jane finds Jeff all she has to do is grab him and kill him because if bullets don't phase her what are the chances of a killer with a knife stopping her? None! Jane can now easily kill Jeff in two seconds,Jane has a healing factor and is super strong and Jeff?...He has a knife that's it! Jane wins! End of story! This made Jeff vs Jane pointless because she will win with all that power and I thought Slenderman vs Jeff was ridiculous...it is and this story made a fight that jeff can't possibly win,Slenderman can kill you just by looking at you and now Jane is super powered...these fights aren't equal,you want an equal fight? Freedy vs Jason is an equal fight an immortal zombie vs an immortal Demon that is equal not this...I'm sorry for rambling but I needed to make a point...this story has destroyed any suspense that a fight between Jeff and this Jane the killer would have,the one in Mr.creepypasta is equal and you don't know who will win until it's over and it's a great story maybe MBK will make a Jeff vs Jane also and I can bet anything that it will be a great story also but this? I'm sorry but no...no,this story can't have a jeff vs Jane because it'll be over fast unless some bullshit happens that make Jeff the ultimate badass...Mr.angrydog I'm sorry and I'm sure you worked hard but this is not the Jane the killer story I wanted to read if maybe you stretched out what happened to Jane after her parents were killed and her struggles to live her life after everything that's happened and in the end decided to stand up and kill that son of a bitch without the whole over powered stuff this would have been an awesome story...but this is my opinion